-Great twist
-The description of the battle with the travelers and their machines sends chills down your spine
-Confused by Jack’s background at first which completely changes at the end. I don’t know if the monoliths changed memories, but it seemed like everyone knew Jack one way then another at the end.
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-I enjoyed the bittersweet ending
-The characters weren’t the most developed ones ever but were pretty good for a short story. The other characters seemed a little anonymous but Hank seemed fairly developed.
-The writing sounded like it was Hank speaking/narrating the whole time
-I liked how the mood changes from grungy, small town to epic space battle. The transition is smooth.
4.1/5 ⭐️
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Super-villains, time travel, alien invasions, government conspiracies, parallel worlds, wizards, monsters, futuristic technology, thrilling adventures, and unforgettable charming characters.
Joe Rover 
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